After editing together the second half of the film, I then gave it to George to edit the 1st and 2nd half together to bring in the next day. Here is the outcome of the 2nd Draft, I feel it is a big improvement on the 1st draft as there are more shots which add story to the film, there are more elements of sound and music as well which does help give the film more depth. The biggest improvement we made was that we filmed at the toilets in the station which is the main location, this ensures that the film seems more realistic as the flow of continuity doesn't break.
There are still some improvements to be made on the 2nd draft such as including more sound/music and just cleaning up the edit through the use of cuts and placements.
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