Black Out 1st Draft

Hey guys, this is the 1st draft of our film "Black Out" this is a very rough edit because there a few things we need to sort out such as music and sound, the 2nd half we didn't do much experimenting so we literally just pieced the clips together as we had them to see how the film worked. We also found out that it was too obvious to see how the toilet scene is a different location.
We let Mr. Titheridge watch our 1st draft and he gave us some key feedback we needed to re-shoot the toilets scene but actually do it at the Train station toilets to allow continuity to flow.
He also advised that we should try to add more of a storyline to the film by adding more meaningful shots so that there aren't too many unanswered questions at the end because sometimes that's not the best thing.

We will the toilet scene and a part of the 1st scene to ensure we get the best footage we can.